I like your narrative and the different paths that you can take. Maybe next time you could add some pictures to help make it more eye catching, like a picture book :)
Hi Qaiden It's Ella F here from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I really like your narrative because you put in the two paths, but next time you could use less full stops and more commas, but other then that it pretty good.
i think your narrative is cool coz you put the question in
ReplyDeleteI like your narrative and the different paths that you can take. Maybe next time you could add some pictures to help make it more eye catching, like a picture book :)
ReplyDeleteHi Qaiden It's Ella F here from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I really like your narrative because you put in the two paths, but next time you could use less full stops and more commas, but other then that it pretty good.
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