The lost ship

The lost ship

There were two explores they recently discovered a cave they they went about 30 metres into the cave then it was blocked off so they went back to there lab and got there tools they needed. They busted through the wall they could not believe what they saw it was a broken boat. They had to fix it luckily they brought the fixer up-325637 it fixed anything in 15-60 minutes depending on how big it is. They fixed but they didn't realise there was treasure as well. They opened the treasure it was a map to all the precious belongings.

They took the map back to there lab they studied it they found the island. They travelled to the island by ship. They made it there but what they saw took there breath away it was the ancient temple they have been looking for since they were 8 years old. They went into the temple and they saw the treasure but there was arrows shooting so it wasn't easy to get past. When they were 10 they took karate so they rolled, jumped and flipped over and around the arrows. They both opened the treasure together the found gold, coins, jewellery and gems.

They took it back to the ship and sailed back home. They sold there gold, coins, jewellery and gems they were rich they could buy what ever they wanted to buy a mansion, Televisions ps4 anything. But at the bottom they couldn't believe what they saw it was...

I chose this piece of writing because I know I could write something interesting on this. I found this easy to write because I could of gone so many different ways. I found choosing what path to go down challenging. My next steps is to make my paragraphs more clear