This week we are working on a poster to send to another school. We picked an object and wrote 40 words about them. Then we chose 20 words about them. Then we cut 2 words that didnt quite fit in and left us with 2 words. Then we put it into a formation. Then we put it into a card so it can be sent away.
Kia Ora Qaiden. My name is Jack and I go to Paihia School. I like your blog post because you told me what you were doing but there were a few mistakes. Do you think that you could maybe make sure that we can see the pictures because otherwise I don’t really understand what it was about without the pictures. Other than all that it is pretty good but when you have fixed it up can you please reply so I know you have! I think that, instead of putting so many pictures you could maybe explain why you were doing it, how you did it & who you did it to, also this sentence doesn’t really make sense. Then we chose 20 words about them. Then we cut 2 words that didn’t quite fit in and left us with 2 words, so could you please fix this up if you have time. Thank you. From Jack.
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