This is my writing about rubbish our school is learning about rubbish because it is a problem in our community. It was hard to write this but easy to copy and paste it in. I think I could make it look better next time. Do you have any ideas on what I can do next?
Your writing is very good, in terms of publishing though, you may want to add more pictures or background colour and make your writing bigger so others can clearly read it. Great piece of writing though :)
ReplyDeletehi my name is Aiden you commented on my blog but i really like how you put pics on it really good
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