I am a student at Bay of Islands College in Kawakawa, New Zealand. This is a place where I share my learning.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Thursday, May 30, 2019
Anzac Project
This is my Anzac project we had to write who our person was, before they went to war and our three tasks. I had three other group members Lj, Daniel and Jahrome. It was easy finding the first two tasks but the third task we has to search a little bit more.
Monday, February 25, 2019
My Northland Experience
On Monday every morning we do free writing we can choose whatever we want this is mine.
My Northland Team Experience.
The First Trials to get in to the team,
We arrived and met our coach Ben he is the under 13's Northland rep team coach. We were just getting use to playing again so we started easy. We had a little 5v5 on a small pitch and small goals. We had to play more smart and pass quicker. We won our first 2 game, We drew the next 2 and then won next 2 after that. We had finished early due to the heat.
The 2nd Trials,
I made it threw to the next round and trialed again this time we versed under 14's. We warmed up and got straight in to the game. Our team played 1st nothing really happened until the end where we just scored and won the game 1-0. Then the next team won 2-0.
The final trial,
I made it through again. We warmed up and played another game we conceded almost straight away and the 10 minutes later we conceded again. I was running in to the box and was about to shoot and got fouled I gave the penalty to our striker and then placed onto the corner with the keeper almost saving it.
We went to warm down and we finished with a passing game.
My Northland Team Experience.
The First Trials to get in to the team,
We arrived and met our coach Ben he is the under 13's Northland rep team coach. We were just getting use to playing again so we started easy. We had a little 5v5 on a small pitch and small goals. We had to play more smart and pass quicker. We won our first 2 game, We drew the next 2 and then won next 2 after that. We had finished early due to the heat.
The 2nd Trials,
I made it threw to the next round and trialed again this time we versed under 14's. We warmed up and got straight in to the game. Our team played 1st nothing really happened until the end where we just scored and won the game 1-0. Then the next team won 2-0.
The final trial,
I made it through again. We warmed up and played another game we conceded almost straight away and the 10 minutes later we conceded again. I was running in to the box and was about to shoot and got fouled I gave the penalty to our striker and then placed onto the corner with the keeper almost saving it.
We went to warm down and we finished with a passing game.
Monday, December 3, 2018
Shipwreck
Shipwreck
There was a once a person called Jimmy he was in a shipwreck that only left him alive. Jimmy ended up swimming 100 meters to a island, The island had food and materials to make a shelter. For the first day he slept in a cave the next 2 days were spent making a shelter and collecting food. There was only 2 types of fruit coconut and pineapple.
The 1st week of him on the island he had created a shelter, a crossbow with arrows and a place to start a fire. He didn't go crazy yet because he had a pet cat and there were other animals there including goats and horses that he became friends with. When he couldn't find fruit he used his crossbow to kill something then his fireplace to cook it.
The 1st month in, he decided that he needed to get off the island he started to collect vines and large sticks but he needed a something to cut down bamboo and trees. He found some strong wood off the ground and then found a sharp rock to sharpen tho wood with he collected his materials but he needed a plan.
3 months in, He had created a plan an made a canoe and some paddles. He created some places to store food his cat and other things he wanted to bring with him. He made a horn so that he could make a loud noise so people could notice him. He had packed everything he needed he was ready to travel back.
Last day he was nervous but he got on his canoe and travelled back it was a safe trip until a storm hit but it didn't affect him too much. He could see the island he was travelling to his canoe was falling apart so he swam the rest of the 50 metres. He made it back and he walked to his home and slept in a bed for the first time in 3 and a half moths.
This is my blog writing we do every Monday. I did this piece of writing because I didn't do anything interesting on the weekends. It was easy writing this because the picture could make a lot of different stories. It was hard choosing a photo because there were so many different ones I wanted to do.
There was a once a person called Jimmy he was in a shipwreck that only left him alive. Jimmy ended up swimming 100 meters to a island, The island had food and materials to make a shelter. For the first day he slept in a cave the next 2 days were spent making a shelter and collecting food. There was only 2 types of fruit coconut and pineapple.
The 1st week of him on the island he had created a shelter, a crossbow with arrows and a place to start a fire. He didn't go crazy yet because he had a pet cat and there were other animals there including goats and horses that he became friends with. When he couldn't find fruit he used his crossbow to kill something then his fireplace to cook it.
The 1st month in, he decided that he needed to get off the island he started to collect vines and large sticks but he needed a something to cut down bamboo and trees. He found some strong wood off the ground and then found a sharp rock to sharpen tho wood with he collected his materials but he needed a plan.
3 months in, He had created a plan an made a canoe and some paddles. He created some places to store food his cat and other things he wanted to bring with him. He made a horn so that he could make a loud noise so people could notice him. He had packed everything he needed he was ready to travel back.
Last day he was nervous but he got on his canoe and travelled back it was a safe trip until a storm hit but it didn't affect him too much. He could see the island he was travelling to his canoe was falling apart so he swam the rest of the 50 metres. He made it back and he walked to his home and slept in a bed for the first time in 3 and a half moths.
This is my blog writing we do every Monday. I did this piece of writing because I didn't do anything interesting on the weekends. It was easy writing this because the picture could make a lot of different stories. It was hard choosing a photo because there were so many different ones I wanted to do.
Monday, November 26, 2018
The lost ship
The lost ship
There were two explores they recently discovered a cave they they went about 30 metres into the cave then it was blocked off so they went back to there lab and got there tools they needed. They busted through the wall they could not believe what they saw it was a broken boat. They had to fix it luckily they brought the fixer up-325637 it fixed anything in 15-60 minutes depending on how big it is. They fixed but they didn't realise there was treasure as well. They opened the treasure it was a map to all the precious belongings.
They took the map back to there lab they studied it they found the island. They travelled to the island by ship. They made it there but what they saw took there breath away it was the ancient temple they have been looking for since they were 8 years old. They went into the temple and they saw the treasure but there was arrows shooting so it wasn't easy to get past. When they were 10 they took karate so they rolled, jumped and flipped over and around the arrows. They both opened the treasure together the found gold, coins, jewellery and gems.
They took it back to the ship and sailed back home. They sold there gold, coins, jewellery and gems they were rich they could buy what ever they wanted to buy a mansion, Televisions ps4 anything. But at the bottom they couldn't believe what they saw it was...
I chose this piece of writing because I know I could write something interesting on this. I found this easy to write because I could of gone so many different ways. I found choosing what path to go down challenging. My next steps is to make my paragraphs more clear
There were two explores they recently discovered a cave they they went about 30 metres into the cave then it was blocked off so they went back to there lab and got there tools they needed. They busted through the wall they could not believe what they saw it was a broken boat. They had to fix it luckily they brought the fixer up-325637 it fixed anything in 15-60 minutes depending on how big it is. They fixed but they didn't realise there was treasure as well. They opened the treasure it was a map to all the precious belongings.
They took the map back to there lab they studied it they found the island. They travelled to the island by ship. They made it there but what they saw took there breath away it was the ancient temple they have been looking for since they were 8 years old. They went into the temple and they saw the treasure but there was arrows shooting so it wasn't easy to get past. When they were 10 they took karate so they rolled, jumped and flipped over and around the arrows. They both opened the treasure together the found gold, coins, jewellery and gems.
They took it back to the ship and sailed back home. They sold there gold, coins, jewellery and gems they were rich they could buy what ever they wanted to buy a mansion, Televisions ps4 anything. But at the bottom they couldn't believe what they saw it was...
I chose this piece of writing because I know I could write something interesting on this. I found this easy to write because I could of gone so many different ways. I found choosing what path to go down challenging. My next steps is to make my paragraphs more clear
Monday, November 12, 2018
The Feathered Creature
There was a hungry creature in the forest he was a carnivore he ate any food in his path he went by the name of the feathered hunter. He was hungry we saw a castle with a lot of people he sky dived right down he ate half of the people but then a brave soldier came out and challenged him to a duel he shot his bow and hit him in the eye. The feathered hunter charged at the soldier he quickly slashed a sword at the creature and split him in half and then the king promoted him to the castle protector and he killed many monsters and kept the castle safe.
Friday, November 9, 2018
Cheetah Report
This is my writing that I have done for the week. I have written a report on cheetah because there my favourite animal and I was really interested in them. It was hard doing it in 2 days with other work.
Monday, November 5, 2018
The Beach
We have started to put writing on our blog every Monday about our weekend or a picture.
On Saturday we went to Paihia to go to the beach in was a really hot day so it was perfect. We ran straight on to the sand and it was burning it was like the sun melted the sand into lava. we ran into the water and jumped right in. It was nice and cold so it cooled us right down we went down deeper so that we could play in the waves they were pretty big and really fun. We were hungry so we went to go get some fish and chips they took about 5 minutes but then we got them and they disappeared in 2 minutes. We brought the cricket set and then played. My dad was first he did some really far shots but I caught his last hit barely. Koda did a good throw and I smashed the ball past every one my dad had to run back and get it he took a shot but missed. I miss hit the ball and it went straight into my mums hands it was getting late so we decided to go home after this last one I took a pitch and hit the three poles it was 6:00 so we went home.
On Saturday we went to Paihia to go to the beach in was a really hot day so it was perfect. We ran straight on to the sand and it was burning it was like the sun melted the sand into lava. we ran into the water and jumped right in. It was nice and cold so it cooled us right down we went down deeper so that we could play in the waves they were pretty big and really fun. We were hungry so we went to go get some fish and chips they took about 5 minutes but then we got them and they disappeared in 2 minutes. We brought the cricket set and then played. My dad was first he did some really far shots but I caught his last hit barely. Koda did a good throw and I smashed the ball past every one my dad had to run back and get it he took a shot but missed. I miss hit the ball and it went straight into my mums hands it was getting late so we decided to go home after this last one I took a pitch and hit the three poles it was 6:00 so we went home.
Thursday, October 18, 2018
My Holiday
Last Holiday I went to Laser maze. We went in the doors their was 10 pin bowling and laser maze we decided to go to laser maze we put on the glowing jacket and clip them on. GO! we ran in the doors to darkness we lighted up more the deeper we went in. I quietly flanked and snuck up on my mum and shot her and dashed away quickly. I got shot and my gun lost it's light for a while, I suddenly lit up again and got a sneaky shot threw the window on my brother and then followed up with another on my aunty but mum shot me threw the mirror. I had to hide so that I could regenerate my light. I spotted the base and rushed towards it shooting and and collecting the points. Me, my cousin and my brother regrouped and snuck up on them while they were shooting the base I got one and my cousin got two the game yelled GAME OVER!. We followed the arrows out. Yellow (My Team) had 17000 points Red (Opposition) 12000 points we won by 9000 points and went to the scores and I read My cousin came 1st I cam 2nd and my mum came 3rd.
Thursday, August 23, 2018
Writing
This is my animal report writing it was easy to choose the animal because a cheetah is my favourite animal. It was hard writing this all. Is there anything I could add?
Friday, June 15, 2018
Matariki Haiku
This is my Haiku poem that I created with Whea Chris. It was easy to make a normal poem but not a Haiku. Do you have any Idea on what I could do next.
Friday, May 25, 2018
Rubbish Writing
This is my writing about rubbish our school is learning about rubbish because it is a problem in our community. It was hard to write this but easy to copy and paste it in. I think I could make it look better next time. Do you have any ideas on what I can do next?
Wednesday, May 23, 2018
Bullying Poster
This is my bullying poster we were learning about it because that it is a thing in New Zealand not much in our school but in other schools it is a problem. It was easy getting the photos but hard thinking about what to write. Do you have any questions?
Monday, July 3, 2017
The Big Crash of a Meteorite
Walt Make a narrative. This is my pick a path I did It was easy linking slides together it was hard creating it by myself and thinking of ideas. I enjoyed making the slides even though it took long. Maybe I could make my story more interesting next time
Friday, February 17, 2017
WELCOME
Hi my name is Qaiden this year I am in Room 5, My teacher is Mrs Cowles. This year I have A couple goals 1. Help the school in sports and get better 2. Learn different writing skills 3. learn new maths strategies.
Wednesday, September 21, 2016
#My Picture Poem
Hi This is Qaiden I hope you like my art if you want to make your own go here -> Tagul
Monday, August 22, 2016
This is an awesome wacky web tale
Read your tale. We were learning our wacky web tale. We were learning our wacky web tale.
The Best Town in the World Creator: Qaiden
pearl jam came to do a concert in Qaidenville once, and the band liked it so much they never left. Now every Friday night, all the people who live in Qaidenville put on their hairy, Red Undies and walk their Cheetahs to the town square. Then they sit on the
grass, listen to pearl jam play rock music, and eat salt & vinegar .
No one has to go to school in Qaidenville unless they want to. Of course, everybody wants to because Michael jackson and Ice Cube are two of the teachers. Michael jackson teaches Sport and Ice Cube teaches Sport too one rugby and one soccer.
One day Michael jackson said to Ice Cube, “Maybe we should take the students on a field trip.”
“That's an Absolutely Fat idea, Michale jackson,” said Ice Cube. “Let's take them to the most fun place we can think of.”
“But that would be Qaidenville,” said Michael jackson.
“You're right!” Ice Cube exclaimed. “Call off the field trip! We're already here!”
This is my wacky web tale our class made one each this is mine you should do it yourself. WACKYWEBTALE
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