This is my writing that I have done for the week. I have written a report on cheetah because there my favourite animal and I was really interested in them. It was hard doing it in 2 days with other work.
You have written this piece well with good structure and language. You could possibly add a bit more detail to your paragraphs to give it a bit more substance, but otherwise you have done well. I too like cheetahs, they are pretty amazing creatures.
You have written this piece well with good structure and language. You could possibly add a bit more detail to your paragraphs to give it a bit more substance, but otherwise you have done well. I too like cheetahs, they are pretty amazing creatures.
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