Monday, November 12, 2018
The Feathered Creature
There was a hungry creature in the forest he was a carnivore he ate any food in his path he went by the name of the feathered hunter. He was hungry we saw a castle with a lot of people he sky dived right down he ate half of the people but then a brave soldier came out and challenged him to a duel he shot his bow and hit him in the eye. The feathered hunter charged at the soldier he quickly slashed a sword at the creature and split him in half and then the king promoted him to the castle protector and he killed many monsters and kept the castle safe.
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You come up with some very interesting concepts for narrative writing, Qaiden. I like that your story flows well but you need to try and add a bit more description and detail.
ReplyDeleteAlso don't forget a learning story - why did you do this piece? what did you find easy/hard? What would be your next steps for this piece?